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Comments Tagged ‘revision’

  • The Ponds 1-17 (1 comment)

    • Comment by Paul Schacht on March 30, 2025

      This is a great question, Ashley! This revision illustrates the value of comparing the fluid-text transcription against the manuscript itself. It appears that Thoreau hasn’t stricken the thought in the words he’s crossed out but simply re-worded it, and that the new words are meant to replace the original. Have a look at manuscript image 714 in HM924, the Huntington’s collection of Walden MS leaves, particularly the section of the image below.

      section of Walden MS image

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